Somewhere, somewhen, so long ago
That details blur together now,
We stumbled on a castle’s ruins,
With sentinels of highland cows,
Approached by a meandering trail
That snaked through downs and doubled back,
Until, at last, it reached a moat,
And there a post with bell attached.
We rang it, and its sullen toll
Disturbed the mist across the ground.
And from the distant shore, as though
Replying, came a grunting sound.
An ancient hunch-backed figure with a
Face just like a prune appeared,
And climbed into a peeling boat
That hadn’t seen fresh paint in years.
He rowed as slow as continental drift,
As we stood there, transfixed,
The surface of the moat unmoving,
Charon on the River Styx
And after an eternity, he reached
Our bank, climbed out and put
The rope around the post, then turned
To us and, coughing, said, “We’re shut.”
August 9, 2013
August 9th, 2013 at 12:45 pm
Beautiful description. And funny. Love the humour. 🙂 x
August 9th, 2013 at 12:48 pm
I couldn’t remember where it was (I’ve seen more castles in my life than I have memory circuits left) so I asked my Mum and she told me it was somewhere called Thrieve…apparently.
August 9th, 2013 at 12:55 pm
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August 9th, 2013 at 12:57 pm
I know, I know. But add them anyway. x
August 9th, 2013 at 1:42 pm
I’ve already got ’em.
August 9th, 2013 at 1:44 pm
Bet you’ve got more than one pair of socks. Where do you keep those?x
August 9th, 2013 at 1:48 pm
In the laundry basket for the most part, although the kitten’s developed a habit of nicking them.
August 9th, 2013 at 1:52 pm
Well, ok. Maybe not beside your smalls. 🙂 x
August 9th, 2013 at 1:55 pm
Not so much smalls as extra-wides.
August 9th, 2013 at 1:59 pm
You make me snicker. Yes, it is a chocolate bar. 🙂 x
August 9th, 2013 at 1:14 pm
I wouldn’t trust going in that boat with that man anyways. He sounds fishy.
August 9th, 2013 at 1:44 pm
It was the only way onto the island…apart from stilts.
August 9th, 2013 at 1:19 pm
Ya had to put a smile on my face right before work….I have never seen one castle in my entire life. Now lighthouses are a different tune!
August 9th, 2013 at 1:45 pm
I like castles. Mind you I like lighthouses as well. Got two of the latter virtually on my doorstep.
August 10th, 2013 at 2:23 am
“I wanna marry a lighthouse keeper and keep him company. I wanna marry a lighthouse keeper and live by the side of the sea.”
Actually, I don’t but it’s a cute song. 🙂
And once again you made me laugh, Brian. Thank you for “the best medicine”.
August 10th, 2013 at 12:23 pm
🙂
August 9th, 2013 at 1:23 pm
Totally jealous on the castles you have seen! Loved the humor in this! Thanks, Brian! 😀
August 9th, 2013 at 1:46 pm
Castles come with the territory. On the other hand I’ve never seen a rodeo.
August 9th, 2013 at 4:42 pm
Hello Brian
August 9th, 2013 at 6:10 pm
Hello Carol.
August 9th, 2013 at 6:28 pm
Haha love this.
August 9th, 2013 at 7:50 pm
And all true.
August 10th, 2013 at 12:02 am
You have a very rich memory and an eventful life. I kinda like your stuff a lot.
August 10th, 2013 at 12:25 am
I have an atrocious memory. It remembers all the useless stuff and completely forgets the important stuff.
August 10th, 2013 at 12:29 am
Your memory is just fine, I have a shocking long and short term mem..
August 10th, 2013 at 12:36 am
My short term memory is…erm…what was I saying?
August 10th, 2013 at 12:38 am
Sorry? What? Who are you? I actually really do have both long and near memory issues.. I can only guess it was the 20/20 consumed in my youth 🙂
August 10th, 2013 at 12:41 am
My memory is just weird. Like I say, I can remember things from forty years ago as though they happened ten minutes ago, but try and remember where my door key is, or whether I’ve taken my tablets or not, and I’m buggered.
August 10th, 2013 at 12:57 am
Ha! Me too!
August 9th, 2013 at 6:29 pm
http://www.visitscotland.com/en-us/info/see-do/threave-castle-p248641
Great poem 🙂
August 9th, 2013 at 7:54 pm
Haha! That’s the place. Excellent. I’m glad it hasn’t changed any. 🙂
August 11th, 2013 at 3:30 pm
Dang! Wouldn’t you know it!
August 11th, 2013 at 5:18 pm
Yes, typical really.
September 26th, 2013 at 2:25 am
“He rowed as slow as continental drift” now that is slow!
September 26th, 2013 at 11:29 am
He was carrying a lot of ballast.