I hid for hours in the grass and watched that busy water vole,
Or rat – I’m not a naturalist. I don’t judge life on what I’m told
Its species is by men in gowns –
Whatever, as the sun went down
The vole, or rat, swam to and fro
Along the dyke outside its hole
With bits of string and moss and leaves and cotton reels and broken twigs.
What it was building in its den I couldn’t say, but it was big.
Some vast machine with bolts and cogs
Of cherry pips and duffle togs
I thought. Perhaps, below the bank
The vole had built a Sherman tank
With time warp capabilities – the only mind alive that knew
How quantum physics held the key to temporal travel. On the shrew –
It might have been a shrew, you see –
Swam gathering fanatically.
At last the sun behind the mill
Had gone. And in the darkness still
I heard the splash of tiny paws that voles, or rats, or shrews might make,
A silver ‘V’ shone in the dark, still trailing chickweed in its wake,
Ploughing on industriously
Engaged, and not a bit like me
Content to ponder on the lives
Of shrews, or rats, or voles, or mice.
August 10, 2013
August 10th, 2013 at 2:27 am
You have a fine imagination, Brian.
August 10th, 2013 at 12:23 pm
But not as fine as the watervole’s, possibly…
August 10th, 2013 at 3:01 am
I’ve never seen a water vole, and now I no longer feel the need to. I’ll file this one away in my mind under V.
August 10th, 2013 at 12:24 pm
V for vole and V for it’s wake. A double V.
August 10th, 2013 at 5:01 am
Water vole~[C19: short for volemouse, from Old Norse vollr field + mus mouse ; related to Icelandic vollarmus ] I had to look the damn word up! You are giving me an education whether you mean to or not…guess I could chalk it up as a good thing. About 75% of the poems you write I must look things up to figure them out…quite the interesting puzzle.
August 10th, 2013 at 12:25 pm
I think watervoles and water-rats are the same thing, although I could be wrong.
August 10th, 2013 at 10:33 am
Lovely poem 🙂
August 10th, 2013 at 12:25 pm
Ta. 🙂
August 10th, 2013 at 11:26 am
You know my opinion on such things but I liked this one. Is the artwork yours as well?
August 10th, 2013 at 12:26 pm
Sort of. I nicked a photograph of a watervole and then went a bit mad with specialised filters and stuff. Now it looks like a turd, unfortunately.
August 10th, 2013 at 3:23 pm
“The WaterTurd” hasn’t got the same ring to it.
August 10th, 2013 at 4:12 pm
Besides, there’s loads of them swimming about off Anchorsholme.
September 26th, 2013 at 2:32 am
Nice tribute to the rat or vole or mouse or shrew or nutria or whatever it was 🙂
September 26th, 2013 at 11:35 am
Ta, thanks, merci, cheers. 🙂